Embracing a Poem

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He looked ahead, straight into an infinite horizon. He had nowhere to go, not a single direction he could call his own. And thus, he could go anywhere. He took a humungous gasp of air, and with that, a pinch of hope, and started walking. Aimless, but determined. All that he had with him were a few blank sheets of paper and an undying pen. And a pair of wings. Of course, wings!

“I have hope,” he thought, “and, thus, I believe.”

But hope in what?

Belief in what?

Belief in whom?

He was brave. Oh yes, he was! Brave, but unsure. He never lacked the courage to spread his wings, but was always unsure of where the winds would take him. But today, he was not going to think of the consequences. Simply walking would not get him anywhere, he thought. Yes, he was going to trust his wings.

He, thus, spread his wings, stretched them to the limit to which they could be stretched. His mind began racing as he felt the air beneath his wings, as the winds began to carry him to a completely unknown destination. He was gasping for breath. His heart hammered within his chest. And even though he was tempted, he did not open his eyes. The winds finally let go of him. He gently floated to the ground and gradually opened his eyes, expecting to be greeted by blinding lights. On the contrary however, there was darkness.

He was in a room enveloped by darkness. But, there was warmth in this darkness; a certain very uncannily pleasant essence hovered in the air. There was a window through which the soft light of dusk nonchalantly glided in. And in that mellow light, he found a poem lying in his arms. The poem smelled amazing; so pleasant was the aroma that the atmosphere was complete. And soft, so soft! The heart of the poem was soft. Instinctively, he grabbed it, wrapped his arms tightly around the poem. His breath was shaking.

“What are you thinking of?” the poem asked, a beautifully deep feminine voice, perfectly garnished with a few pinches of huskiness.

“I don’t know,” he began to answer. “I am just so calm right now. I am so aware of everything – this cacophony of silence, every grain of light that is streaming in through this window. I am just so calm. I am at peace with myself.”

The poem smiled a satisfied smile and he found himself doing the same. He glanced at the sheets of paper which he had let go off, as he put his arms around the poem. This time, however, there were words on them. The sheets were not blank anymore. His pen was still undying.

And there he sat, in his moment of truth, in their moment of truth, where no emotion mattered. Thus, he sat there smiling, embracing a poem.

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Illustration by Bhumika Ray

Opinion

I thought the piece was very well written. The style and content of the extract made it very open to interpretation. The literary allusions gave it a slightly surreal and metaphysical bend. On a personal level, I was very impressed with the depth of the ideas with which the author tried to engage the reader, and I like how he took us through a range of emotions. However I felt like there could have been a little more in terms of realization and reactions from the protagonist – it seemed like the author stressed more on the journey than the realization, which could also be just as effective. Overall the extensive use of oxymorons, allusions and similes made it a very enjoyable and riveting read. I look forward to more.

- Nilesh Balakrishnan

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  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Kevin-Thomas/617362208 Kevin Thomas

    Cacophony of silence. =D

  • Anurag

     Thank you so much, Nilesh for the overwhelming feedback.

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